Dear Parents,
We are inviting you to share with your child their Student Portfolio. Two stars and a wish is your chance to provide comments on your child’s achievements. The two stars are for you to identify two areas, tasks or achievements that your child has made that you are particularly impressed with. The wish is an opportunity for you to note an area or skill that you hope your child will work on throughout the rest of the year.
Congratulate your child on aspects of his/her work, such as:
¶ Their successes ¶ Any improvements in their work ¶ Presentation of their work ¶ Content of their work ¶ Their creativity ¶ Evidence of risk taking and having a go ¶ Reflections and understandings they have demonstrated ¶ And other positive suggestions on how they could improve their work
Here are a few examples to get you started:
¶ I like the way you have settled into school ¶ I like the stories you read to us each night ¶ I like the way you learnt your tables ¶ Your story writing shows that you are ‘having a go’ at spelling new words ¶ I like the way you spoke clearly to the class ¶ We are proud of the way you have... ¶ We like the way you are doing your ‘Personal Best’!
And offer positive suggestions on an area your child could work on: ¶ I hope you continue to work on your tables facts ¶ Your handwriting is really neat. I hope you can use it when you are writing your stories.
To add comments for your child to this page:
Click on the 'edit' button in the top right hand corner of this page.
Scroll down the page and click in the box next to the first star picture. Write your comment under the 'Write your first comment about your child's achievements here'.
Click in the box next to the second star picture. Write your comment under the 'Write your second comment about your child's achievements here'.
Click in the box next to the wish list picture. Write your wish for your child under the 'Write an area or skill you hope your child will work on over the remainder of the year here'.
Click on the SAVE button in the top right hand corner of the screen. This will take you out of the 'editing page'.
Wait while the page reloads to see if your comments have been added.
Write your first comment about your child's achievements here
You have done so well in all your work Haley! I especially liked your slide show of the Sovereign Hill excursion.
Write your second comment about your child's achievements here
I also think you have done a great job, Haley! You have thought carefully about what you have done and learned and communicated it clearly. Well done!
Write an area or skill you hope your child will work on over the remainder of the year here
I think that more concentration on proofreading your writing will ensure that there are less mistakes with spelling and punctuation.
I think it is good if you read back to yourself what you have written, because that will also help in correcting mistakes. I'm sure you'll continue to work on this during the rest of 2010!
Dear Parents,
We are inviting you to share with your child their Student Portfolio. Two stars and a wish is your chance to provide comments on your child’s achievements. The two stars are for you to identify two areas, tasks or achievements that your child has made that you are particularly impressed with. The wish is an opportunity for you to note an area or skill that you hope your child will work on throughout the rest of the year.
Congratulate your child on aspects of his/her work, such as:
¶ Their successes
¶ Any improvements in their work
¶ Presentation of their work
¶ Content of their work
¶ Their creativity
¶ Evidence of risk taking and having a go
¶ Reflections and understandings they have demonstrated
¶ And other positive suggestions on how they could improve their work
Here are a few examples to get you started:
¶ I like the way you have settled into school
¶ I like the stories you read to us each night
¶ I like the way you learnt your tables
¶ Your story writing shows that you are ‘having a go’ at spelling new words
¶ I like the way you spoke clearly to the class
¶ We are proud of the way you have...
¶ We like the way you are doing your ‘Personal Best’!
And offer positive suggestions on an area your child could work on:
¶ I hope you continue to work on your tables facts
¶ Your handwriting is really neat. I hope you can use it when you are writing your stories.
To add comments for your child to this page:
You have done so well in all your work Haley! I especially liked your slide show of the Sovereign Hill excursion.
I also think you have done a great job, Haley! You have thought carefully about what you have done and learned and communicated it clearly. Well done!
I think that more concentration on proofreading your writing will ensure that there are less mistakes with spelling and punctuation.
I think it is good if you read back to yourself what you have written, because that will also help in correcting mistakes. I'm sure you'll continue to work on this during the rest of 2010!